On a rainy day...

Mar 4 2008  | Views 889 |  Comments  (50)
A rainy day. You know the type of day I am speaking of, where it’s pouring not just cats and... Expand

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  shail mohan posted 5 mnths ago

Thomas Cherian: Thanks for the appreciative comment.



  shail mohan posted 5 mnths ago

MayaAnil: Thank you so much for the comment and reco.



  shail mohan posted 5 mnths ago

Bharatborn: Thank you for dropping by and also the reco!



  juneborn posted 5 mnths ago

Awesomely romantic , beautifully worded.



  DSampath posted 5 mnths ago

setting is very beautiful
mood is vey romantic
no need for words ,action speaks
no need to know who he is.....
what ishe  doing there ?
how do you know him?
love speaks.....



  ddas15847 posted 5 mnths ago

Shaila,
             That's great writing! Just watch out for the breath/breathe issues though.
Once again a very nice story!



  s uma posted 5 mnths ago

Shail, seamless writing.  Enjoyed every bit of it.  - S.Uma



  Thomas Cherian posted 5 mnths ago

well written...rain adds additional glamor to the love....it was good....erotic without being vulgar



  MayaAnil posted 5 mnths ago

Hi Shail,

You really write beautifully

Regards,
MayaAnil



  bharatborn posted 5 mnths ago

Enjoyed it.





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