very touching....being a women i feel it from my heart........keep writing

Thank you flowingdown and ajitnambiar.

In our journey Truth derails

And Love remains in misty veils

Life is no beautiful dell

Crawl into your safe hard shell

In your fortress in my heart

Stay alive till we depart.


the ending was reall good!

its is sensetionally good

keep up the good work

My heart felt thanks to each and every one of you for stopping by, leaving comments and also recommendations.
Regards
Shail

hi shail, 
tough for little girls  in today's world   ...  women's liberation movement  has come a long way   but not long enough     
nice display pic of  yours    it is just as I pictured you  :)    jaijui

Shail

Very well expressed. 

It is a reality, isnt it? But what inspires the negativity - very uncharacteristics of your writing.

The lines were hard hitting. Very difficult to ignore.

Hi Shail. 

Sad....but , true !    Isn't it a pity ? 
I am sure Noida incident made you write this ! Scary hey!

 dear shail,
beautifulpoem
allow me to give it a positive twist..

wait for the time 
when heavens bell chime
when lord make you his strong hold
come mingle freely with the world