Don’t pick me up
From where I am fallen
Let me so remain
Into million bits...
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Don’t pick me up
From where I am fallen
Let me so remain
Into million bits broken
Don’t try and gather
Let the pieces scatter
They shall never fuse together
So why should you bother
But….
My love, please tread softly
Don’t step on them harshly
The broken fragments carry
Dreams I held closely.
-Shail Mohan (June 2008)
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Girish: Thank you. Yeah its a bit sad.
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Poignant, poignant...Liked it, Shail...but it felt so melancholy!
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Vivek: Most times they are. Thanks for the reco.
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A contradiction of emotions...but well said
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Naval Langa: Thank you for your appreciation and also recommendation.
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Ravi: Nice to see you here. Thanks for the appreciation.
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Lakshmi: Glad I could convey the sensitivity of the situation. Thanks for the lovely comment and reco.
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Jaijui: Hmmm should it be '..comunicates the writer's feelings well' or 'the writer communicates the feelings well'??
Thank you for dropping in and the comment.
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Ranjini: I laughed out loud reading your comment. I couldn't help it!!
Thank you for the comment and the thumbs up!
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Enchanted world: Thanks for the visit, the appreciation and the reco.
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