Promilla: Thank you. Here I am >>>>

Shail poem is very nice...but it is not in your usual mood.

The sadness hurts.

Keep smiling.

Promilla

Lone_crusader: Just finished reading your story. I was interrupted in between by my son with the usual, 'I am hungry' but I ran back to finish it as fast as I could. Thanks. I enjoyed it.

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CB: I followed your link and read the poem. It is indeed a nice one and whose content is soemthing that is very relevant. Thanks for the appreciation of my effort.

Vijayaraghav: Glad for the appreciative comment. Thank you for the recommendation too.

very nice poem

and relished it more as i read it after a great poem "mere bete" whose link is http://nupurroopa.sulekha.com/blog/post/2008/07/mere-bete/comments.htm?utm_source=notification&utm_medium=dashboard&utm_content=viewed%20a%20blog 

reading both in quick succession added a lot of value - and their meanings reinforced each other

thanks~

~CB

The sombre feeling which you expressed through your versus is really marvelous.  

The following lines are really fantastic.

You killed me yesterday

when defenseless I lay

in your arms.

As I lay bleeding

life ebbing

you said you loved me still.


which makes a subtle feeling and i liked the way you expressed it.  Keep it up.

Sampath: Thanks for the comment and reco. Yeah, nothing can destroy the being.

Usha:
Thanks for the reco